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Post  Renée on Sun Oct 16, 2011 7:31 am

I FINISHED ROUND ONE OF EDITS!!! bounce bounce bounce king

Alright, celebration over. Time for Round Two: Polishing & Sharpening!

…You know, like a sword. What a Face (It may or may not be 3:30 in the morning. I think I'm leaning towards may.)
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Post  Constance on Sun Oct 16, 2011 2:40 pm

Yay!!!!!!! *throws confetti* ...Shouldn't Amanda be the one saying this since she wrote it? I love your twinness. xD
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Post  Maggie on Sun Oct 16, 2011 5:42 pm

WOOHOO!! *proud* That's awesome! Very Happy What's the step after the polishing and sharpening (like a sword) ???

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Post  Amanda on Sun Oct 16, 2011 6:36 pm

@Constance--Welll....*cough* I'm not done editing. Renee' is. So my announcement will be coming quite a bit later, haha. Embarassed But! I only have one chapter left--the chapter Renee' just finished. So I'll be getting on that. *retreats to dark editing corner of doom*
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Post  Renée on Sun Oct 16, 2011 6:41 pm

The next step is sending it out to beta readers: Testing & Trying (like a sword). XD

I came up with a whole forging process last night.

Brainstorming & forming ideas: Gathering Raw Materials
Writing the first draft: Melting Raw Materials, Getting Rid of Impurities
Giving the draft distance: Letting Prepared Metal Cool
Revisions/rewriting: Reheating, Hammering into Shape, Folding Impurities Out
Round one of edits: Tempering & Fine Adjustments
Round two of edits: Polishing & Sharpening
Sending out to beta readers: Testing & Trying

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Post  Maggie on Mon Oct 17, 2011 9:47 am

@Amanda You can do it!!

@Renee LOL!!! Woah. You know a lot about sword making! O_o

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Post  Renée on Mon Oct 17, 2011 4:53 pm

Lol, I wouldn't say I know a lot, I've just researched sword-making several times. Smile And I did check my ideas with the actual process before posting to make sure I had it all right. It's from a simplified Japanese technique--theirs are the best. Very Happy
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Post  Constance on Wed Oct 19, 2011 11:17 am

@Amanda I took so long in replying, you ARE done now. xD Congrats. ^_^

@Renée I LOVE your metaphor. Very Happy
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